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Hello Honorable, Respected Jurie and Fellows :)
Following is my Selection task I had been given to perform for Selection.

 

 

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blocked_user blocked_user:

Hello Honorable, Respected Jurie and Fellows :)
Following is my Selection task I had been given to perform for Selection.
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10-01-13 - 10:01:25


blocked_user blocked_user:

MY SELECTION TASK:
Bayogi ka shabaab Or Aansoun ki maala kehty hain.
Is Sukhn naashnas dunya may hamain Sameena Ghazala kehty hain

Hi there! Assalam O Alikum! This is Sameena.. PLEASE RATE MY INTRO 10/10

Okay so here is the long Intro. Actually it was adviced to keep it short (hehe)

(star)This is Sameena Ghazala. An Artist, A Poet, Afsana Writer(kittyrose)

(star)I am an artist, I do painting, Sketching and Calligraphy that have been uploaded here too.. :)

(star)I like Urdu Poetry, Songs, Painting, Cooking and Here also BOYS VS GIRLS GAME

(star)I like Chating, my Age is 21 and Student Of Fine Arts and B.A.

(star)Kyun Apni tarha jeenay ka Andaz Chorh dain?
(star)Kya hay hamary pas is andaz k Siwa?

(star)So Rate me 10/10 to Keep me going ON.. Thankyou all (kittyrose)
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SELF RATING OF ABOVE INTRO:
My rating for my INTO TASK is 6/10


EXPLANATION OF RATING:
I rated it honestly for I realise that there were some shear carelessness in my task. The main Reasons for such a rating is

1) I avoided using English language though I explained my INTRO in poetic manner. For that I deducted 1 out of 10.

2) Next, the poetry I shared seemed too short to me, I soon realised. and I deducted 1. THough it is in URDU and users really liked it.

3) The third point deducting from rating is my further INTRO in English was not poetic.


RELATING ABOVE INTRO WITH MYSELF:

1) First In a nutt shell it was throughout a Nice intro though there was some carelessness i explained above.

One good point about the INTRO was the stanza

Bayogi ka shabaab Or Aansoun ki maala kehty hain.
Is Sukhn naashnas dunya may hamain Sameena Ghazala kehty hain

which deeply describes me Of being a sensitive nature, caring, hurt and mature nature.
A girl that is full fledge and has gone through many hard times. (Ansoun ki maala), NECKLACE OF TEARS

2) Another main thing that is really Good i provided further explanation of my self at the end so everybody could easily know me. But this rating has realised me my own faults about the INTRO TASK..

3) It was nicely colored. Especially the last lines were differently decorated that users liked the most.
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So here it ENDS, as it was supposed to be :)
Hoping for Best :)
THankyou all.. Bye Bye (heya)
Sameena GHazala
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10-01-13 - 10:01:54


MaXpaYne MaXpaYne:

hmmmm..... good and honest. . . , 8/10 *

10-01-13 - 14:22:45


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