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Ek thandhi subah by: AKHiL

Blog ID: 8816

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Waise to ham bade majakiya types aadmi hai , kabi sad-sad nai feel karte hai , hamesha khush hi rahte hai chahe kuch bhi ho jayee..
Lekin Kabhi kabhi kcuh aisa ho jata hai jisse ham sochne pe majboor ho jate hai.
Bhai baat kuch yo hai ki ham Pune me rah rahe hai aaj-kal to thoda sa style b aa gaya hai. Ab isi winter season me ham aapne ghar aaye thee Bihar mee. Kuch din wahi rahe, khub mutton-Chicken ka breakfast kiyaa. Fir waha se as usual man bhar gaya , fir hamne socha Lucknow chale, ab Lucknow jana ho to hame ghar se 4 baje subah me nikalna padta hai aur uske liyee hame 3 baje uthna padta hai , aur back reCord dekhte huye kisi ko yakin nai huaa jab hamne is mission ko complete kar liya. Khair Itni subah me Jab ham station ke liye nikle to koi rickshaw wala nai dikhaa. Meko laga mai kuch jyada hi bada tees maar kha nikla , itni subah uth gaya.
Khair , bhala ho strolly bags banane walo kaa, aur usse bhi jyada pahiya (wheel) banane wale kaa jisko wajah se ye invention ho paya. Itna bada bag jisme hamne mummy ke lagbhag sara cooking talent bhar rakha thaa aaram se kheeche chale jaa rahe thee. Waise ek baat bole yee stroly bags nee traveling me revolution ka kaam kiya hai , ab jyada saman jyada nai lagte , bibi ji chahe jitna saman thoos dee , Miya ji bas muskurate hi rahte hai , Baccho ko to instantly papa-driven vehicle mil jata hai jisse unki wajah se hone wala faltu ka rickshaw ka kharcha bach jata haii ... Aur style statement to hai hii , ha kuch Kooli logo ke pet pe halki laat padi hai , lekin usse kya , world me agar chote logo pe laat na pade to bade loog paida nai honge.
Khair ham kuch aur batana chah rahe the aapko, Kuch door chalne ke baad hame ek rickshaw wala dikh hi gaya . Mai uske paas gaya , mere puchne pahle hi usne kaha
-^station chaloge ?^
Maine kaha - ^kitna loge^
-^30 rupaiye lungaa^
-^20 me chalo nai to mai ja raha huu^
Khair 25 pe mamla fix hua.. Ham baith ke chalee , waise shahar me raho faltu ki bate karna aadmi sikh hi jata hai , hamne dekha wo bina jute ke thaa hawai chappal pahni thi , maine tapak se kaha - ^aree jute pahna karo bahut thandh haii...^
Wo bola- ^are jute se pair bandhe lagte hai ... Kaam nai ho pata...^
Hame achanak hi jaise jhatka lag gaya. Uski aawaj se aisa nai laga ki wo sach bool raha hai , jab ghar me dudh na ho to kaise koi nimbu ki chai ko health ke liya aacha bata ke mehmano ko pilata hai, bilkul wahi bebasi uski aawaj me thi... Fir Hamne dekha itni thandh me wo dhoti-kutre me tha aur chadar oodh rakhi thi hath me Dastane bhi nai the...
Mere andar ek ajeeb si kasmasahat hone lagi, aachanak hame yad aaya , jam ham subah subah uthe to mummy ne bahut mana kiyaa bolii ki- \"subah ki train se na jaoo .. Bahut thandh hoggii.. Lekin muje jane ki jaldi thii too ignore kar diyaa” . Kyaa iski ma ne ise nai kaha hogaaa ki itni subah naa jaoo bahut thandh hogii ... Shayad nahi, Kyuki itni himmat nai juta pai hogii ki wo use rook ke ek waqt ki roti pee musibat dalee ..
Jab ye nikal raha hogaa wo padi hogii kisi maile aur thandh ki simsimahat se gili padi chadaro ke andar , aur chup chap apne bete ko itni thandh mee jalne kee liyee jate huyee dekh rahi hogii .. Haaa , usee himmat hi nai hui hogii ki pet ki bhookh ke samne apne bete ke bare me sochee..
Haaa biwi ne jarur rokaa hogaaa... fir kuch ladi hogiii ... Kismat ko kosaa hogaaa ... Budhiyaa bich me bolii hogi to use bhii do-chaar sunaa kee gusse se karwat badal liyaa hogaa aurr saraa gussaa bacchee koo ek chamaat mar ke nikal diya hogaa..
Bacchaa rotee huyee uthaa hogaa... Bapu ne dant ke sula diya hogaaa.. Ya fir mithi goliyaa lane ka dilasa diyaa hogaa. Lekin bacchoo ka to isme bhi fun haii... unko ye kaha samajh aati haii ki ye sab bhookh ke liye samjhaute kiyee ja rahe haii....
Yaha to jab ham nikle thee to mummy nee bahut kuch bhar diyaa tha bag mee .. Na jane kya kyaa , bag bhari huaa ja raha thaa meraa.. Ham raste bhar soch rahe thee jane Q bhar diyaa itna kuch.. Hame kabi kabi gussa bhi aa raha thaaa .. Man kar raha thaa chood ke chala jauu ..
Lakin kaha naa - \"mere bag me strolly thaa\"
Maine sochaa ki subah subah is rikshewaale ne kuch khaya hogaa ya nahii ... Ya aaj subah ka nashtaa ye mere diye paisoo se karegaa .. Aur karegaa bhi to kyaa 2O rupaye me kudh khayegaa ki ghar waloo ko khilayegaa ... Itni subah koi uth ke iske liyee nashta banaya hoga ki naii ? .... Aree kaha se banaya hogaaa.
Agar itni thandh me subah ka nashta mil jata to yee yaha aa ke haddiyaa thodi na gala raha hotaa...
Soyaa hotaa befikar , din ka din me dekhne ke liyee ...
Sadak ke kinare khade kutte bhi hamare rikhsow ko dekh rahe thee jate huyee... Ab to shayad unhe bhi aise kai logo ko dekhne ki aadat pad chukii thii... Naye naye me dekh ke bhauke hongee.. Fir dhire dhire pahchan gaye hongee... Ki ye bhii waise hi log hai jine har subah .. Kar waqt ka khana tabi naseeb hota hai jab bina mausam dekhe, bina waqt dekhe... Kaam karee aur pachasoo logoo se bahas karee ... Ab to jis din ye log na dikhee ye kuch jyada hi bhaukte hongee...
Isi mee inhee kuch wardi wale bhi mil kate hongee ko aaj kal 50 ke kam me mante hi naii ....
- license dikhaaooo
- yaha no parking haii
- station kya tere baap ka haii ?
- tu to sale shakal se hi choor lagta hai , itni subah aaya Q?
- green card, identity card na jane kya kya mangte haii ...
Inhe jin shabdoo ka matlab bhi nai walum wo ye sab kaha se dikhayee ?
Aur 5O/- me to pure ghar kaa din me kharcha chal jayegaa?
Aakhir kaha samjhauta karengee q u wardi wale bhagwaan ko na to budhi ma dikhti hai , na biwi ka gussa , naa bacchoo ki umeed, wo to bas chadhawa lena jante haii ...
To yaha thodii bhaag-daaud ki koshish hoti hogii ... Itni thandh me agar 4-5 dandee khaa kee 5O/- bacha liyee to kyaa kam hai ? Pet ki bhookh ke aagee shareer ki kyaa aukaat... Tabi to inti thandh me bahar hai yee.
Thodaa jyada mehnat soch kee 4-5 dande bhi kha leta hogaa... Q ki ye mehnat se nai dartaa... Darta hai to haram ki khane see , aur mehnat ki kamai chin janee see.
Apne bhagwaan ki tarah nai hai yee... Iska bhii kuch aatm-sammaan hai , garimaa hai , viswaas haii. Tabhi to kuch nakara logo ki tarah bheekh mangne ke bahayee yaha itni thandh me bhii paseene baha raha hai.
Hame dhiree dhiree railway station wali announcement sinai dene lagii thii .... Lights dikhai denee lagii.. Wahaa na jane kitne hii rikshewalee, khaki-bhagwaan, aur kutte dikhai diyee mujhee...
Mai muskurane lagaa thaa...
-“Station aa gaya saab”
Mai niche utraa ... Aur paise de diyeee.
Itne deep & emotional thinking kee baad bhii maine use 5 rupaye jyada dene ki jahmat nai uthai...
- kyaa kareee chuutee ka problem bahut chal raha hai aaj kal.
Lekin ke arth-heen muskurahat ke sath maine puchaa - ^Chai piyogee?^
....Usne mana kar diyaa.
shayad wo 5 rupaye ki chai ke liyee 20 rupaye ki dusri sawarii chodna nai chahta hogaa. Ya fir, Badan ki garm karne ke liyee Pet ki aag kafi thii.

17 01 13 - 12:18:12

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Rate: 5 - Points: 15

Ek thandhi subah : Recent Comments

- Ali_

Haqeeqat likhi Aap ne bhai aisa wahi sochta his Mai feelings hota h aur ye bhi boht badi bat h aaj k daur Mai kisi k liye chahe kuch kar sakny ki position ho ya nahi mgr ehsas ka hona zaruri h nice bhai good thinking:)

09 08 15-01:51:53

- Gambit

Superb
A worth reading hindi literature
Shabdo ko bohot khubsurti se piroya gya he bhavnao aur vivashta ka samagam dekhte hi banta he (toohappy)

26 05 15-08:48:08

- chanderi

Kafi achaika h .. yup hamesha hi mazakia rahena hithik nahi kabhi kabar apne emitions ki bhi kadar karni chahiye .. kabhi kabhi rona bhi acha hota h

18 11 14-12:38:43

- Wilded0olf

grt thinking bhai:p gud wrkk.. (up) ..

15 11 14-20:38:52

- SweTa_kiLLer

bahut badiya aur tum sach mein achi tarah se likha motu akhil(claps)

04 12 13-21:01:24

- raj-rocks

In bato se mujhe kya matlab aapki life jaise jiye

13 06 13-22:49:00

- CrAzyJeSsi

bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne bihari babu:p waise itni gahri soch hogi aapki socha nai tha:) i can Imagine each n every line...u wrote(clapping2)

20 02 13-12:57:47

- ZeRo

Nice read..Akhil bro...Keep it Up..I loved it..:)Nice work

18 01 13-22:36:37

- LuCk ME

Awesome Writeen, i Read It All Every Line And Every Word:) Superb:)

18 01 13-22:06:35

- Dreamguy

so many around us but we wil see them once. sometimes i feel that man who works hard will get hard life and who cheats others who do scams and earn they are happy. realy meaning of life has been changed in these times. but every1 shud knw the sweetne

17 01 13-18:09:14

- G0D-f4tH3R

(oh) AkhiL BrO Wt a Touching Scene, i ws Imazine It in my Mind ReaLLy AwesOMe BrO, Touches HearT

17 01 13-10:42:09

- Am4n786

Waaow kiya bat he mamu mast he yar jaldi writer banjao

17 01 13-02:00:21

- DrEamYgaL

Jst awsm akhil,, yar tm likhte bahut ache ho, aur ye bahut gehri s0ch ka result hai,, vry gud(claps)

17 01 13-00:55:58

- Raptur3

dat was awesome.. really worth to read..

17 01 13-00:31:07

 

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